Two unnamed poems
Yup, Two unnamed poems here....
Will try to think of their names soon.
Suggestions are welcomed.
Written on 28/3:
Her eyelids started to fall,
But she knew she couldn't,
She shouldn't-
Fall asleep.
A huge mountain towered over her,
She was timid and small,
It overpowered her,
Taking her from sleep.
Inside, she screamed out for help,
Inside, she wept.
It hurt deep inside when no one came,
But it was reality, a fact.
Who knows how hard she worked?
Who knows how much she gave?
No one saw her late a night,
No one saw her-the slave.
Silently she cursed those who were heartless,
Those who did not care,
But curses were useless,
The pile was still there...
Written on 30/3:
Silently she wept,
No one was there,
She knelt down in pain,
No one cared.
She hoped and wished-
Help would come,
That someone, anyone,
Would take her by the arm.
Hug her tight,
Whisper in her ear,
Those comforting words,
She wanted so much to hear.
She was alone,
Left there to rot,
Or face her doom,
Whichever she fought,
She knew she would lose,
And yet she had to,
For she had no choice,
She was the fool.
She was afraid,
Afraid she was,
She tried to get out,
But she was lost.
Slowly,
Tears trickled down,
No one-
Saw the frown.
She tried so hard,
Time after time she failed,
She knew she couldn't do it,
But she couldn't bail.
Why did she get picked?
Why her? she asked.
Silence-
It wasn't a play, no lines, no cast...
DONE! Not that good huh. that's what i thought. Oh well, hope that didn't dissapoint you that much....
Will try to think of their names soon.
Suggestions are welcomed.
Written on 28/3:
Her eyelids started to fall,
But she knew she couldn't,
She shouldn't-
Fall asleep.
A huge mountain towered over her,
She was timid and small,
It overpowered her,
Taking her from sleep.
Inside, she screamed out for help,
Inside, she wept.
It hurt deep inside when no one came,
But it was reality, a fact.
Who knows how hard she worked?
Who knows how much she gave?
No one saw her late a night,
No one saw her-the slave.
Silently she cursed those who were heartless,
Those who did not care,
But curses were useless,
The pile was still there...
Written on 30/3:
Silently she wept,
No one was there,
She knelt down in pain,
No one cared.
She hoped and wished-
Help would come,
That someone, anyone,
Would take her by the arm.
Hug her tight,
Whisper in her ear,
Those comforting words,
She wanted so much to hear.
She was alone,
Left there to rot,
Or face her doom,
Whichever she fought,
She knew she would lose,
And yet she had to,
For she had no choice,
She was the fool.
She was afraid,
Afraid she was,
She tried to get out,
But she was lost.
Slowly,
Tears trickled down,
No one-
Saw the frown.
She tried so hard,
Time after time she failed,
She knew she couldn't do it,
But she couldn't bail.
Why did she get picked?
Why her? she asked.
Silence-
It wasn't a play, no lines, no cast...
DONE! Not that good huh. that's what i thought. Oh well, hope that didn't dissapoint you that much....
posted by cookie at 4:53 PM
4 Comments:
'The reticent plodder' for poem no. one... Ehehe... I just used a thesaurus for the word 'silent' and 'slave'... I know I'm lousy... For poem no. two... A simple 'Why?' would suffice? Oh well... suggestion given. Up to you to name your chef-d'oeuvre.
Nice poems. Lots of angst, for topics such as homework and impromtu. Heehee. :D
ooooooooh...
well..uh...GREAT POEMS! but i'm not a poetic kinda person..dun really like to read poems..so sue me =.=
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