Another poem!!!

Hello all!
Thanks for the umm... you call those comments?!?!?!
Be serious!!!
Nevermind..

Oh yea, flo!!! i especially like the part Aragon went like 'that's retarded.' too!!!!'
Myb it's coz of the look on his face.. hahaa...

Anyway, today woke up at 3 something in the morning to do my piano homework(i sooo hate theory!!!), and i wrote this poem.
Please comment on it!!!
Thank you sooo much!!!

The Other Choice
The sun has yet arisen,
The moon still up,
Birds in their nest,
I'm tired but-

Soft footsteps,
Waking dust from sleep,
The ticking clock,
Noiseless to those who sleep deep.

Beautiful night,
How peaceful, how serene,
Moonlight lights the path,
The one I've never seen.

Looking closely I realised,
No-- I've seen this before,
Been through it never,
They say it's the law.

That must have been lies,
It must have been,
Maybe they've never seen,
What lies within.

For it did not seem dangerous,
Now in the moonlight,
Instead; calm and beautiful,
Beauty of the night.

Through the shining path,
My journey filled with wonder,
Scary-- I can't say it wasn't.
But mostly my mind just pondered.

What is this feeling?
This excitement i feel,
Where have all this been?
The secret path I never knew.

The never ending path,
Never ending surprises,
Frightens me but--
My courage rises.

Now that i've been through it,
No one can say I haven't seen,
The other choice,
The could have been.

Well?? Well???
How is it??
Like it???
I like it.... though... i'm thinking my vocab for this poem is extremely low... keep saying beautiful.. what say you? is it OK?

For goodbye world,
If you were wondering, which i'm guessing you weren't,
It's kinda like i'm sealing myself from the world.
Something like that.
Look at it again.
It's not that good coz only some parts show that...

Get the laughs of your lifetime!!!

I would like to thank Braden for this.
This will really make you laugh..
Hilarious.
Release stress! it's good...:p

Go here:
http://img226.exs.cx/img226/632/Heh.gif

Go now!!!
Laugh!!! hard and loud!
You won't be able to control yourselves anyway.... so... ahaha.. who cares if they ALL hear you!

hope you all enjoy it as much as i did!

Goodbye world

I wrote this poem, it's kinda lousy coz it doesn't really tell you what i'm trying to say...
So... read this for me, and tell me what you think it's about.
Then, give comments. it'll really help.
I don't really like it(the poem), but whatever...

Goodbye world,
Won't you wave at me?
One last time,
Before i leave you be?

The original way you were,
When i wasn't there;
Which would you prefer?
I'm sorry. I don't care.

For now that i've decided,
My mind will not change,
I'm going backwards,
Down memory lane.

Goodbye world,
Go on, wave at me,
I'm sealing myself,
Setting you free.

I tried to fit in,
Tried to show you,
The true me,
But you were cruel.

I told you my secrets,
Gave you my heart,
My soul to you,
Was useless art.

I was too complicated,
You didn't understand,
My feelings, my dreams,
There wasn't a hand to lend.

Who knows who I am?
Who i could've been,
Leave me now,
Forget all you've seen.

Goodbye world,
I will never forget,
The times you were,
And weren't there...

Well, what say you?
Sounds a lot like......... a suicide note doesn't it... I KNEW IT!!! Failure!!!!!!!
'No...........' (screams in frustration)
Nevermind. i know i know. when i read it myself, i felt like it was a suicide note too. No, you're not stupid. I'm just not so good at this.

Let's see how your response is to this poem, (is this a poem?)
And i might post some of my past ones(that i happen to like) up.
Hehe...

Happy commenting!
And happy guessing what it means.

DON"T RUN AWAY!
Leave a comment!!!! plz?
Man i'm evil. haha... :p

The long tiring run...

Well, it's over now. what is done is done.
sigh...
Yesterday, we had our 'meretas desa'... cross country.
Well, i could have won something, BUT. yes, there's a but... BUT!!! i umm... walked.
I had no idea why i walked, but i really really regret it.
I know i could have gotten something, coz i saw you yingxu!!! you were like... less then 1 meter away from me... and ppl, yingxu got 12th place. CONGRATULATIONS!!!

Oh, i would like to take this opportunity to congratulate Li Li, for getting 5th! wow. that gurl can run! and Joleen for getting 6th, and of course... (drum roll... 'softer guys! you're going to spoil their eardrums!') Rachel!!!(kwan) fer getting 1st!!!! alright!

Oh well.. at least i got a point for my house.

Hmm... more updates on the tissue issue. hey! that sounds funny!
'tissue issue! tissue issue! tissue issue!!!'
'stop saying that!!! you're annoying me! who cares how it sounds like?!?'
'me! i care! this is so much fun.. tissue issue! issue is tissue without the t! cool...'
'oh come on! get on with what you're about to say already!!!'
'aww man... ok...'

So anyway, about the tissue issue. (laughs)
'Ouch! hey! why d'ya hit me fer...'
I've seen two other packets of tissue now..
One said dragon harrbor(pearl harbor), and there was this dragon there with this cat, hugging each other... (not as hilarious as tomb radar, but still funny.)
The other one i saw today(shown to me by florence) said tatinic...(titanic) and there was an elephant and a cow there... no wonder the ship sank... haha...
Hmm... i wonder what kinda cross breed you get out of a cow and an elephant... a cowlephant???? what's that?!??! ... =_="

On another matter,
HOW DO YOU GET TAG BOARDS IN YOUR BLOGGIES!!?!?!?!?
*sob* if only i knew..
i don't know how to add links to my page too... myb i'm just dumb.. or blur...